by Ayase, the Remainder Sun Jul 06, 2014 4:44 pmSoooo I've been writing this story all week now... got no idea if I want to leave it where it stands or do something more with the characters later on. I kind of left a few things untouched, like 'the Keeper' having split personalities - didn't go too much into that but it's a general assumption throughout the entire story so it kinda wasn't needed to be stated.
The characters are clearly stuck with each other, though one of them has serious issues admitting his feelings for the other... so perhaps I could later do more with that, but I'm unsure, because I love leaving the Keeper as this strong-willed mystery. I threw some of his history in there, that I was fighting to get out all along, and I like and dislike that part of it (it's kinda sad) but I wouldn't change it for the world.
I'm pretty proud of this story. My first one that's potentially complete, though I'm not sure if it's going to BE complete or not yet. Or if I'm going to do like a Part 2 or "to be continued" kinda thing. Depends really. But yeah accepting comments if people wish to do so. Otherwise thanks for reading if you have, and if you haven't well there's a yaoi warning in effect lmfao!
-Aya
The characters are clearly stuck with each other, though one of them has serious issues admitting his feelings for the other... so perhaps I could later do more with that, but I'm unsure, because I love leaving the Keeper as this strong-willed mystery. I threw some of his history in there, that I was fighting to get out all along, and I like and dislike that part of it (it's kinda sad) but I wouldn't change it for the world.
I'm pretty proud of this story. My first one that's potentially complete, though I'm not sure if it's going to BE complete or not yet. Or if I'm going to do like a Part 2 or "to be continued" kinda thing. Depends really. But yeah accepting comments if people wish to do so. Otherwise thanks for reading if you have, and if you haven't well there's a yaoi warning in effect lmfao!
-Aya
